Audience Feedback

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gg4SKIyoJvI
Here is a video of the feedback i was given from my audience

Character Profile

Name- Matthew Layford

Age- 17

Family- Mam and Dad. Sister

Girlfriend- Emily Thompson

Friends- David Griffith, Josh Thompson, Joe Helyer, Shannon Brown

Likes- Drinking, Partying, Seeing friends

Dislikes- School, Police, Being sober

Hobbies- Getting drunk, Playing games, Watching TV

His role in the film is that he is the main protagonist in the film and the film orientates around the events of the previous night and figuring out what has happened.  

Script

Mathew: (picks up the phone) Hey David. You alright?

David: Hey man. Yeah I’m fine. That was a hell of night

Mathew: Was it can’t remember a freaking thing!

David: Dude stop screwing with me.

Mathew: I ain’t man. Start from the beginning?

David: Alright. Where to start the best night of our freaking lives? Well where should I?(cuts to in front of Mathews face and zooms into eye) Where we messed up the street?

Mathew: What the?

David: Where we went into the club?

Mathew:  Huh?

David: Getting the coke?

Mathew: Wait what? Start at the beginning?

David: Alright alright. It was a Night To remember! Or in your case of being a light weight, a Night to forget! Wait. What (pause) (whisper) someones in the house...

Mathew: What David?

David: (sounds further away) Who the hell are? Get off me! Get away. Help! Help! HEEEEEEEEEEELPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!

Obscured voice: Hello there Mathew. Remember me? No answer huh? You can just listen. Did you think you could get away with ripping me off? Huh asshole? Well now we have your little friend here. Remember that what you took from me last night? Yes good. Well im giving you 74 hours for you to get that back to me or else

Mathew: What thing? Can you give me wee little hint on what i owe you?

Obscured voice:  Well i could but then me and David cant become new friends. O and if you go to the police i will kill David and his family. I will kill your girlfriend. I will kill you but first I will kill your dog!

Mathew: Haha. I don’t have a dog though asshole.

Obscured voice: Well i will buy you a DOG THEN I WILL STAB THAT IT AND SKIN IT. AND DO YOU SEE YOUR BALLS THERE IF YOU DONT GET MY SHIT BACK THAT IS MY COMPENSATOIN. So bye bye love you. See you soon

Mathew: (looks shocked and drops phone) Shit. (picks up phone)Emily? I need your help

Final Story Board

Shot List

1-Title screen

2-Opening shot of a Matthew's Face-Close up

3-Title screen

4-Side view of Matthew's face right- Close up

5-Title Screen

6-Shot of Matthew asleep in bed- Medium shot from the bottom of the bed

7-Title Screen

8-Side shot of Matthew face left- Close up

9-Shot of Matthew asleep- Medium shot from above him

10-Shot of Matthews Eye closed- Extreme close up on his eye

11- Shot of Matthews face- Close up

12-Shot of Matthew from side of the bed Right- Medium shot

13-Shot of Mathew from bottom of the bed Left- Medium shot

14- Panning shot from bed to door tracking Matthew- Medium shot

15-Shot of Matthew from the side right- Medium Shot

16-Shot of Matthew from the front- Close up 

17- Shot of Mathew from the side left- Medium shot

18- Zooms into Matthews face- Close up

19-Shot of Matthew from the side Right- Medium shot

20-Shot of Matthew from the front- Close up

21- Shot of Matthew from the side left- Medium tracking shot

22- Shot of Matthew from the side Right- Close up (camera bumps twice)

23- Shot of Matthew from the side right- Medium shot

24- Shot of Matthew from the side left- Medium shot

25-Shot of  Matthew from the front- Medium shot

26- Shot of Matthew from the front- Medium shot

27-Title Screen

Film Version 3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fCCxFPmBViU&safe=active

How I created Mathews Style?

Here is a video i have created using animto explaining how i created his style.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCRg3mfZ_5Y&safe=active